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Optimizing your wording for your web site
 Posted - 12/06/2008 : 12:14:01 AM
By avpro
I am a professional DJ and am looking for help in working for a section of my site.
One of the services offered is Weddings.
On the home page to wet the appetite for wedding services the info im thinking about may read like this
The Bride and Groom remain the focus of YOUR WEDDING DAY
We handle everything for you!
Question: I have been to events where there are wedding coordinators, or complete entertainment companies that handle "everything" from entertainment, to banquet catering, photography.....
Since I am a DJ and play music and even MC the event by announcing the arrival of the bride and groom, cake cutting, first dances; what is your impression of the wording we handle everything for you on the home page. Of course more wording about services will be added to the linked to page for weddings.
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 Posted - 12/06/2008 : 09:15:06 AM
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The Important thing about wording for your site is.. What will the customer get from your site?
What are you going to tell the customer?
And the most important thing, that most ppl for get about, is ... What do they get from your site? what kind of information, services, etc...
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Posted - 05/16/2009 : 7:25:04 PM
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Another thing I would like to add is that, no matter what you do, say, or show the customer; If your not meeting their need(s) then that is will it will stay.
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You would obviously be looking in to possibly "What is wrong with my computer?" or "How can I fix my computer".
Now by saying that, what if you landed on a site that said nothing but "buy this, discount that... bla blaa bla, right? (well that is at least what I do  )
Ok, but now say you landed on a site that said something like this :
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Posted - 07/16/2010 : 12:10:29 PM
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| quote: I am a professional DJ and am looking for help in working for a section of my site. One of the services offered is Weddings. On the home page to wet the appetite for wedding services the info im thinking about may read like this The Bride and Groom remain the focus of YOUR WEDDING DAY We handle everything for you! Question: I have been to events where there are wedding coordinators, or complete entertainment companies that handle "everything" from entertainment, to banquet catering, photography..... Since I am a DJ and play music and even MC the event by announcing the arrival of the bride and groom, cake cutting, first dances; what is your impression of the wording we handle everything for you on the home page. Of course more wording about services will be added to the linked to page for weddings. Originally posted by avpro - 12/06/2008 : 12:14:01 AM
I said all that to say this.... When doing "keywords" and optimizing for google, MSN, ask.com, etc...
You want to keep revelancy. so in essense you could say
"We keep the bride and groom the main focus of your wedding"
or you could say....
"Our DJ's for your wedding keep you the main focus at your event"
The first one you can see .... Okay, keywords : Bride, Groom, Wedding
the second one : Wedding DJ, DJ events, Wedding DJ's, etc....
Understand?
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